ooh! the BG looks pretty good! and i like their outfits! especially her top. so cute

OMG! Thats an awesome piece of art!! <3
I love love love love love love their outfits!
*Tries to think of someone i can stick them on* XDD

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Angels Do Exist

*Thinks* And there is blood splatter...they must have killed someone...
Either that or they had a session of paintball...

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Angels Do Exist

MINE! *'s Codie* Mine~ *growl*
Fine, I'll give him back *clings* In a minute


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MOVED- See journal for more info.

Well, it's interesting!

Black is in fact the color in which all other visible light is absorbed. White is the color at which all colors are reflected. And gray is any shade between black and white. So, Black and white ARE in fact colors!

Pros:
-The coloring was done really well, as I really get a dark and dreary from this one.
-I definitely like Melodai's face. There are times where I find something I really, REALLY like out of luck. That face is one of those kinds of things for me. XD

Cons:
-The first and biggest thing this time is Codie's face. His face at the 3/4 angle looks really weird, and it kind of broke my concentration on the rest of the pic. What happened is that you tried to do that view, but when you did, the eyes went to a diagonal. It's not about making the eyes turn, it's the head. The eyes should look like they got thinner, not shifted angles. XD

Then for the face. Framework can help here---framework poses limitations. It tells you how big the head is going to be and gives you the shapes you need to make sure it comes out right.

I have a couple more pros and cons, but the head really distracted me. XD

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Determination is the key to the dream.

;w; Thank you for stating that fact. For once I don't have to hear that they are shades and etc. ... YAY.

... now for your review. ... I think I tried so hard not to laugh about you being oh so distracted, but oh how I really want to laugh right now. *can't cos its night and family might look at me oddly* I can be honest and say I have trouble with that view when drawing faces, and I can also see that the slantiness of his eyes were a big mistake. I do need to practice using framework, which I'll spend my time doing with my 100 Art Themes I'm going to soon begin on.

But yehh I pretty much agree with your cons & pros, and glad this pic creates a dark atmosphere. :3

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wow, pretty :3 and wicked XD~

the "they did it!" phrase makes me think of two things.. it's either they did IT or they did some kind of murder owo

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<sub>"Win the victory before you declare the war."

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I like it! The bg is really great, and the lighting on Melodai's face just draw your attention to it.

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love from

little crazy me

I love Melodai's Outfit! w

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“Dude, It’s like …hot gay sex in the mouth.”
“For serious?”
“For serious, man. God …it’s sooooo good.”
Demyx to Axel in the AkuRoku FanFic Inertia Creeps: [link]

those hanging bloodstained curtains are awesome yani o.o

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